Triptych Competition
19 August 2024
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Results
First Place
The Changing Door – St Marys Axe London
By Lee Butler
Second Place
Pick n mix
By Peter Wrighton
Third Place
Rock Solid
By Ray Shard
Highly Commended
Abstract view
By Robert Watts
Highly Commended
Biscuit tray abstract
By Robert Watts
Commended
Horses of the Camargue
By Robin Elms
Commended
Pink Connection
By Amanda Graham
Commended
Wheels
By Ian Harrop
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Results
First Place
Coloured Glass
By Oksana Khomytska
Second Place
Swan Lake
By Penny Simpson
Third Place
Ella in Motion
By Amanda Graham
Highly Commended
Room with a loo
by Ray Shard
Commended
The Wonderful World of Macro
by Lee Butler
Commended
Harvest Mice
by Liz Peat
Commended
THE GREEN GREEN GRASS OF HOME
by Ray Shard
Commended
Rotating lily
by Robert Watts
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Judges Comments
19th August 2024- Bob Goode
Printed Tryptych Panels
Puffin Glow
Charming set of three images. Work well together. Tones need to blend slightly better- warmer needed on the left. Held.
Coloured Glass
As a panel, these are very appealing. Technical quality is good, great translucence to the glass. Colours are excellent. Could go well on a wall. Angular shots on either end are good. First.
ICM Black and White Study
Monochrome works well. Very strong images and good use of ICM. Centre image is very spooky. Left hand image is slightly out of kilter due to the busy-ness. Held.
Flamingos of the Camargue
Technical quality is very good, well controlled shadows and highlights. Slight over sharpening on beak on the right hand image. Well selected images.
Swan Lake
Strong set of images. Uniformity across the images is very good. Photoshop tip- Windows>info>luminance value of each pixel. This can help match backgrounds. Second.
Harvest Mice
Good idea for a panel. Left hand shot leads us in. Commended.
The green green grass of Home
They work really well as a panel. Slight angle on each outer image is good. Commended.
Life Under the Underpass
Monochrome conversion very good. Some burnt highlights, but works well in this case. The highlights and shadows in the two outer images lead well in to the centre. Great composition. Tells a good story. Held.
The Wonderful World of Macro
Really well done individual images. Great bold colours, with the green linking them together. Ladybird could be better as the centre image, as red is such a dominant colour. Commended.
Rotating Lily
Print quality is delightful. Control of highlights is great. Lovely layout, works very well. Stronger lighting maybe needed, slightly dark as prints. Commended.
Seashore
Groynes in the two outer images lead well to the centre. Leading lines are echoed. Left hand image could be cropped to remove the sun. Horizon levels need to be better matched. Good textures and tones.
Room with a Loo
Great to have fun with photography! Great print quality. Good choice of colour, and great well balanced colour. Highly commended.
An Eclectic Mix
Excellent, captured moments, Nice and sharp with good depth of field. Images are slightly too separate, not a strong enough link to make them a panel.
From All Angles
Quite attractive, vegetation at the end of its life. Stem used at each end to lead you in. Slightly too grey, maybe lift background tones a bit.
Ella in Motion
Like the balance, but slightly too tight in the frame. Charming set. Third.
Valerian in Vases
Like the method of display, the black board helps bring the images together. Even print density across all three, helps them match. Vase position on two outer images is good. Right hand vase could drop down a few millimetres to match.
DPI Triptychs
Pick n Mix
Great appeal. Like the colour on the two edges, and lack of colour in the centre image, as this draws the viewer in. Rounded corners hark back to the trays of sweets in shops. Great vision from the photographer. Second.
Up, Up and Over
Tells a good story, would also work as a panel. Flows across the image nicely. Balance of the crops on each image are good. Centre image is a bit more zoomed in, making it larger in the frame. Outer two images need to be more matched on the zoom level.
All Tied Up
Very well planned and staged. Excellent work by the model to give the correct feeling of being pulled. Hues of the background work nicely. Held,
Performing on the Rings
Slightly too much white around the image, a stroke line would help, or less of the white surround. Good, well caught moments with good lighting. Well posed and good choice of shots. Mono works well, and helps focus the subject. Held.
I Can See You
Triptyches are meant to create 4 images- this works well. Nice and sharp on the mouse, good depth of field. Right hand image might have worked better on the left to have it leading in. Centre image is very strong, good colour and direct look. Switch the left and right to have both looking inwards.
Abstract View
Great image, lots of look at and interpret from the poses of the observers. Good story. Alignment of outer two images is good. Right hand image could be cropped slightly to remove grey area at top of image, to match with left hand Image. Small details matter. Highly Commended.
All White
Interesting study, the swan is a good pose. Reflections on left and right are strong and work well. Middle image without reflection is good. Held
Meadow Grass
Good choice of images, the diagonal on the two outer images leads you to the centre image. Busy backgrounds could do with tidying up. Held.
Rock Solid
Intriguing shot. Very cleverly done, builds across the image and forms a great peak. Background colours are strong. Third.
Flying High
Strong image. Like the three individual images, but could have done with variety in the levels- make them slightly more portrait, and add a little more height, make the centre image so the rider is higher in the air. Good mono conversion. Held.
Horses of the Camargue
Three really beautiful images, with great control of the light. Not a traditional triptych- as doesn’t form a fourth image when all together. However, the three images together do tell more of a story of the life of the horses. Commended.
Discussion
Cleverly done, shadow of the figure links across, as does the heal of the gentleman, very strong. If taken individually, the two outer images lack excitement.
Life’s Tangled Web
The fourth image isn’t as strong as it could be, but the three images are well done. Well put together, but lacks link and flow through the images. A little too discordant.
Pink Connection
Crops of the fabric at the edges of the images are a bit unfortunate, but don’t really matter to the image. Like the flow across, almost perfect. Love the neutral background, and great colour. Good skin tones. Commended.
Sleep Well
A bit scary! Like the balance of the images, with the wider view on the outer two images, and the tighter zoom on the centre. Creates tension. Held.
Biscuit Tray Abstract
Quite inspirational! Images from everyday objects are great. Tones are strong. Could be improved by slightly more tightly matching some of the lines/curves on the tray across the whole image. Highly commended.
The Changing Door- St Mary’s Axe, London
Like this image a lot. Very graphic, great location. Placement of the legs in the outer two images is great, as is the pop of colour in the door on the left. What could the narrative be? First.
Catching Supper
Centre image caught at exactly the right moment. Tells a story- could be either panel or triptych. Held.
Fretters on Tour
Excellent job of managing the blue, really brings across the texture. Choice of grey background in the centre, and warmer outer images is good. Two outer images need tones looking at- right is quite a lot darker than the left, Centre image catches the eye, due to the pose. Held.
Awaiting an Order
The three shots could be more suited to a panel. Well captured moments in the three shots. Doesn’t as well make a set of three creating a fourth image.
Wheels
Strong triptych. The crop on each image works well to link the three images. Commended.
Tea for Three
Very clever, each is quite a good image on its own, but all three together create a good fourth image. Held.
From a Different Perspective
Good idea, but needs a few improvements. Red is slightly too strong a colour for the background colour. Good be improved by lining up the horizons in each.
Atrium Geometry
Geometric shapes in monochrome work well. Central image being simpler and more high key works well. The three images don’t link too strongly together.
Kings Cross Station
Dark image in the centre works well, but needs an edge to separate it from the background. Right hand image is very strong, with great leading lines. The emphasis across the three images is interesting. Held.
Close Encounters of the Floral Kind
Left and right hand shots are good, great tones on these. Central image not as strong. Works as a triptych to a limited degree, mismatched colour unbalances the image.